Sweet and original, just what many people like :) it is hard to come across a love poem on this website that is not terribly cliche, but well done on yours.

wow thats very good...thats how i feel about this guy i liked since 5th grade and now im 10th...heh..love at first sight...

Damn Rena that's a long time:)

Well done on your poem very cute and sweet! Loved it and keep it up:)
xoxox

Very good poem...I kno how u feel ! but im not sure about th last line though...

Very good. =) I have felt the same way, I think many of us have. Take care!

This is a very cute poem. I guess thats all i have to say about this.

i really liked this poem, but the endind for me kinda messed it up...so i gave it a 4..