Comments : Let Me In or Let Me Go

  • 19 years ago

    by Scar upon my mind

    Good Poem. I think it was good, especially the ending, but I think you need to work on your beat as well. But the lyrics were great. Sorry bout the negative comment, but its what I think

  • 19 years ago

    by Gabby

    hey gabs your poem was good. i loved it and i have a feeling its about jonathan. :) am i right?? i bet i am. well, i LOVED it. i'll see ya later hon. have a good day.

    Katie