This is my asylum, my highest endeavor
This is my orphanage, the family forever
You threw me the obvious and it was nefariously beautiful.

like everyone else i especially like the last stanza, but anyways, awesome poem! 5/5

This is a beautifully written poem. Nice work, and if this is your home, then it sounds really nice. if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!

"This is my asylum, my highest endeavor
This is my orphanage, the family forever
Near Half the World, I dip my toes
In that blue of the Caspian Sea "

Wohooo! I guess the same lines impress every one else too!
Thou, these were the outstanding lines, the whole poem was brilliantly written. It is filled with wise lexis and beautiful images.

Wow *is speechless* that was awesome! Very well written, I can't wait to read more! I couldn't even pick a favorite part, the whole thing was FANTASTIC. Your talent shines through this peice very well. Keep it up!

-Cheerfully Cynical

killer of time sometimes when people write poetry, you have to think a little to get the meaning.

anyhow i thought this poem was pretty. good job.

Wow that must be nice.. I guess. Ha. Yeah, great work. You have a lovely use of imagery.
Take care.

Nice! I loved the imagery you used and the descriptions. I love reading personal poems, where there is a brilliant story behind it for the poet. You did create a sense of "home" and peace. I'm trying to pick something i didn't like for the sake of critisism, but i honestly can't find it. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

thats really cool...its cool that it means so much to you and that i represents something! good work!

Excellent, Very good keep it up!

What an amazing poem, I feel this site needs more poets like you. You really represent this site well with your ability! You give great vivid descriptions as to this poem. You have briliant imagry and the flow to this poem was captivating from the first sentence. Great Job!

this is a really good poem..its original and different..great work!! keep it up!! :)

good nature poem, very poetic i liked it. 5/5
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