Nicely done hun. My heart goes out to all the people in the war. It was kind of you to write such a poem. Keep It Up.

Take Care, and thanks for the comment on my poem, Much appreciated.

thanks for the comment, if you ever get hter chance to visit a war grave i would definately say go, but take plenty of tissues. the sadness adn peacefullness of it stays with you forever.

Aw...very touching, great job with this poem keep up the good work

Very well done, you said it really well, i can see the picture in my head. Keep up the awesome work :)

xx, PorteR

awesome..i luv war poetry...and this on eof da best poems ive read dealin wid the subject....

This is pretty good, although in some places it doesn't flow very well.

wow, all your sad poems are really good. I have yet to write a sad poem, well maybe one. Anyways, keeo up the good work. 5's

This was really good too. It was very touching and heartfelt I'm sure. 5/5

the last stanza in this poem is absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!!! proud to be brittish, yet being ashamed by being man. very expressive and honest. really rounds off the emotions concerning war and ultimatly mankind.
amazing lol!
polly

I love memorial poetry. I think you did a very good job with this one. Thanks for sharing.

Nice poem... you're very good =)
Keep the up the good work..
5/5 for you!
Please check out some of my poems.
Take Care from September

I really enjoyed reading this poem, and when i read it i felt sorry for all those soldiers. But very good poem, 5/5 for this one.
SatuzKa

So sad...good descriptions.

nice job keep it up.