This poem is interesting.
There are 2 sets of lines that rhyme.
There is no pattern.
But I like the idea and message behind it.
Its a start.
Toodles

uhh.. thanks.. i think
i wasnt really tryin to have any rhyme scheme or pattern.. i was just tellin it like it was.,

poems dont exactly have to have a ryhme scheme or pattern lol very nice you have great talent this poem says alot

thanks