he he i commented my own poem:P

that was really good although im plezed its not true xxxx

hey i like thanx for commenting on mine..i relaly like to knwo what people think about my poems well ima go love always shanna Irene

hey i like thanx for commenting on mine..i relaly like to knwo what people think about my poems well ima go love always shanna Irene

Really good poem. I liked how you wrote it and put it all together. Keep it up! Thanks for the comment, take care always & God bless!

-GJ

Really good Great job

*amanda

Touching poem, very emotional considering it's not a true story :S
Little bit of work could be done with your rhyming because it's slightly irregular, but it's still a great poem. Well done, Take care.
-Laura.

brilliant poem check mine out if you get a chance

That was VERY good. Loved it 5/5 keep up the good work :)
-Spike

It gave me goosebumps, I loved it you made me feel as if I was going through what you were saying, great job and please keep it up!