wow, i thought i'd just read some of urs cuz u asked me 2, but that wuz really Really Good. The non rhyming thing was really powerful. lemme check out some more!

lol people what non ryme.... it was ment 2 ryme haha it musnt b good then

well it does rhyme- it was really well done, not to obvious butthere and well done so it flows, keep i tup! luv kt