umm im nto sure wat the alst part means but all ina ll a good poem keep up the good work best wishes always
luv rach
p.s please read some of my poems

Very good for someone who hasn't been writing long.Keep up the good work.

I thoght it was super

thank you for your comment on my poem.. this was one of my favorites of yours, theres alot of emotion, very good, keep it up!

God damn i liked that one, sounds like some insane shit id do if i ever cought my love screwin around on me!hahaha sry ill shut up now...lotta luv, erika