mmn i understand what you are saying. it does need a little work but please keep writing because you could be brilliant if you put your mind to it. take care xx

god thats beautiful,
take care,
i loved it,
deserves more than a 5,
ellie
xoxoxo

brilliant hun :) x x x x

wow, this was really powerful. enjoyed it immensely. great job :)

wow this is a very deep poem....... it was brillaint very creative and well written i really enjoyed reading it...... having a window into your feelings so to speak....... beautiful poem you have a way with words and you are very talented! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

hey chick thats a real good poem x x x x