Whoa! Heather that's some crazy stuff. It's really good. It really hit me hard. I hate the fact that i know that things like that really happens though. I wish i could everyone in such a position in life. Another great poem added to your collection. Love yah bye...

That was a d*mn good poem... Well written... Keep it up.
Aaron

I love that you wrote about this. This is the worst kind of tragedy that happens all too often (in my opinoin) that, being the love-sick girl abused and unloved by an unworthy man. I liked the stance,
"Body Covered With His Bruises And Burns
So He Could Make Her Body His Graffiti,
Ignorant Girl Ran Back To Him Every time,
Tainted With Abusive Love...Too Blind To See."
Because it portrayed the girl's hoplessness and desire for love, so much that she was willing to endure tremendous amounts of pain to the point where she is beyond repair, jsut for love, for the feeling of not being lonely. I absolutly loved the last two lines, I thought those were lovely.

OMG thats so sad..hummm...wat else can i say but great job as always..=)..keep it up Heather cuz u noe i love ur work=D..latez

*XoX Sw33ti3*

Hey Heather! ya I'm sorry I haven't been able to talk that much usually when I get on I can only talk for a bit because my parents come downstairs and start fighting each other and me. . . but so far I've been okay I had a good day Saturday and there wasn't really anything bad that happened. . . and my life is just staying mainly on track. . . anyway about your poem!!! I love this poem! seriously! it really surprised me because that sounds like how my dad treats my mom and it really was an amazing poem! it was so sad but so beautiful! and the way you wrote it just so . . . idk i've run out of words to use!!! but I really do love this poem!!! keep it up!!!

Love always and forever, Taylor

Very moving.. Great poem, I look forward to your next.

-S~

wow i like this poem you have great talent. check mine out if you have time. keep writting!! l8rs x

Woah. very well wriiten but erh... kinda... umm nvm

omg, i hope this isn't true but a really well written poem. i'm sorry i couldn't write no more poems heather, but now i don't even have time for my self. to much work aughhhhh........i just hate school.
well i hope u'll keep on writing and yes, i'm alright. thanks for asking.
later "trueheart"

truly amazing...This is a great poem !!! Keep it up ! Take care,
E.

hey grl. well I really didnt mean to offend you in anyway at all. You poems tell alot about you so i feel like I know you. And I want to help. email me at lilcupidgrl07@hotmail.com. and tell me what this is all about. What is the problem your having. Down feel like your bothing me because your not. I really want to help, but I dont think you want others reading your problems so just email me. luv ya lotz!*+*+*BritBrat

whoa this is harsh tragic its so deep but its real and this isnt fiction either this stuff really happens is what sadens me good job on the poem though peace

I don't know what to say to that, i guess it's good to know that it crushes me for my mother ren back to an abusive lover, becauase he hit us. but i hate the thought that such things, as this are true, for they are, and it only fuels my hatered of my fellow men.

thats really sad...it reminds me of my babies dad..

very powerful and meant alot...great work, great work

Hey thanx for the comment on my poem and i liked that poem God Must Not Exist its really good thanks for the advice ALWAYS Billi Jean

Hey great poem!! i really like it!!! comment on mine if you get a chance!!

xX-Katherine-Xx

wow this is a good poem.i liked it alot.your a good poet Heather. luv ya lotz!Brit

Aww. I hate gys who do that..it's so...Immature..

Chris

Great one

wow, that poem was really good. i liked it alot. I think that it's kinda hard to read though.

~jesus loves you~
*Fake