Comments : Why I hate You

  • 15 years ago

    by jennifer

    I really liked it.. I thought it was powerful how you hate but love too.. it sucks when that happens.. have a great day and keep on writing

  • 15 years ago

    by Jenn

    hey great poem.... i really like your writings .. keep it up!!

  • Some parts I liked, others I didn't. I'm not too sure I like these:

    I hate the sun
    I hate the rain
    I hate your face
    and I hate change

    I hate how you treat me
    and the way I act
    I hate when I turn
    to the sight of your back

    I hate your friends
    and how they are gay
    I hate it when
    you have nothing to say

    Overall, a very nice poem. 4/5 Great Job, keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by oOXkonnXOo

    it was a very good poem! very powerful! the only part i wasnt too sure about was:

    I hate your friends
    and how they are gay

    but thats just me lol
    keep up the great work!

  • 15 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    this is an interesting poem. you seem to rhyme and sometimes maybe even be joking but then you get serious again. good job tho. 5/5
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*

  • 15 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Hate is such a strong word..but I can relate to everything you hated in this poem. You get a 5 from me. The best words are the ones you can relate too in my book.

  • 15 years ago

    by UM

    Another good one...just out of curiosity, have you tried to write any poems with rhyme schemes other than abcb? Or have you tried to write anything in freeverse?

  • 15 years ago

    by dragonfly

    I'm not a big fan of love poems, but i love this one, keep it up.