Comments : Wreck

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    To: Withney Nichole Mitchell
    Why? For what pupose should I do so? I have no reason to do as you say. It does not matter what you want me to be or do. I care not what you think I should do. If you cannot offer critizism or compliments then do not comment on my poems. I have no time of my own to waste on a pathetcic excuse of a comment such as yours. So do not comment unless you wish to give insightful advice which is highly doubtful.
    ~Deepthroat

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    i really love this poem, the imagery was amazing, beautifully written...*5

    Love Heather

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Wow...this poem is amazing...i am still amazed by how you can word your verses sometimes...

    He sits crying a sound of anguish
    Sobs racking eyes sliding closed
    Breathing heavily nostrils flared
    A broken form his body posed

    I dont know why but its just awesome...great work

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