Wow I love how you can just make up storys to write its really cool.. Im being serious because you have lots more you can write about its good keep up the good work

Very sad,but it is a good poem.

omg u r so good i started crying

thanx so much! I don't think I'm that good.

HEY:) I really enjoy readin ur poems, so I added you to my favorites. I really loved this one too. I have 2 poems that I actually wouldn't mind you reading. They're called.
Daddy please dont hurt me &
wife n' daughter home sweet home

They're about abuse. Bye honey! Im off to read more of your poems.!

Not a true story? damn girl u were making me feel sorry for you lol. that was real good. keeping doing your thing ma.