i thought it was really good, and i can completely relate, check my poems some time......Keep up the good work,
Later days

too true.......yes to all of them x-[ x

Sad, yet sweet poem. I really liked the way that the whole poem was sort of composed of questions that were already answered. Great job. You've got a lot of talent. Keep up the good work!
-Kate

a lil longer would have been better, a good poem...keep it up!

hey that was also a good one...
but the one line in the middle...
sorta through the poem off track...
the ending line really put it together...
i gave you a four...
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*kathleen*

Great peice, it really fit together well, and the use of questions thoughout really makes the reader think.

5/5

This poem really makes me think and wonder.
I love and appreciate you ness!!
..xx