I love your poems, there so different from what other people write. This one was really nice. Not fully understandable but I really liked it. You’ve got a 5 from. (btw your things say there copytight, can you tell me how you did that because I need to copyright mine too)

Another intersting approach Robert. I like your unique style and will continue to read on a regular basis. Keep up the good work so all may enjoy,

I actually enjoyed this poem, I don't usually like poems about life or nature but I thought the rhyiming was pretty good. keep writing!

good theme,but this one was a bit harder to follow..your flow is a bit off,which made it a little hard to read with a smooth, constant pace.

I feel much like that at times that i don't belong with others and that
im better off with nature

(like 5 months ago u told me 2 comment back sorry im a lil late but better late than never)

It had a good theme and its very nice

The flow was a tad off
try doing a syllabol count
or something
otherwise the storyline
was good

Good poem.
It flowed well and the rhyming didn't seem forced.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Im not too big on reading poems about life and nature but this one was pretty good u could work on ur grammer a bit but other than that great job