Comments : My life as a solar system

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    Great write hun, well done...loved it =)...very unique! ^.^ <33 love you much <33 xxxx you're so amazing...don't ever forget it xxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by shes ♥suicidal

    that is such a good poems... well all of you poems are real good... especially ashes to ashes dust to dust... you are such a great writer... yeah .... just like lisa i thoufght the ending was real good... well keep on writing ur real good.....

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    That was unusual. Really liked it a lot. Keep writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    I loved it! The way you used the solar system to represent yourself..was really creative and u did it well. thx for your last comment on mine, it's appreciated, and feel to check out some more! lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    very deep...loved it ! take care,
    E.