Hey this is an aweosme Poem! i love it keep it up

xX-Katherine-Xx

Thanks Katherine!

Thats a really great poem, love it! love the way you used that little rhyme xxx
p.s. check out mine if you get a chance :)

That's really good - and a good use of the 'star light, star bright' Well done.

All of your poems are really good!

-Lyd

I like how your stanzas arent all the same, very good job there. I wonder do you realy do these things, or is it just thoughts you write about???

this is a really deep poem very sad but very good, great write. 5
~!~Noelle~!~