wow, would have been better if there was a little more emotion, in my opinion, but thats just me maybe keep writing

wow...yet again.. very... hmm.. idk the word for it but this is a very good poem.. i can tell youre having a hard time in life.. but just keep strong and try and talk to someone.. believe me it does help..

thats so awesome... i feel like this all the time so i can really relate to this poem. keep up the good work!

Amazing --- i can relate to this poem so much great work love your work