truthfully Rachel, i love the story in itself, the images it created me of this guy being here for you and falling in love with him, the situations that arised. I kinda almost started crying b/c of the relation it sorta held but however, your ending was weak. Thats not a good message. People should go for what they want and follow that!! I understand he had a gf but feelings should be spoke for tommorrow is not promised..
~~~CARPE DIEM~~~~

hope you dont take me to offense, i am juss very honest, however, i added u to my faves b/c i wanna keep in touch, plz continue to check mine out! God Bless
Love Heather

Thanks Heather! i understand

oh whoa ho!! girl thats awsome. i'm sure all of us have been in a similare posistion and this is great even though it isn't a poem.

Hey rae, yeah that was really good, i likee reading all ur stuff,
i think you shud go for it and tell him, like hidden pain said, nothing is promised, so go for it, does he still have the gf
xox 5/5
xox bam