very nice poem.. keep up the good work. 5 stars for you.
please check out some of my poems, it would mean a lot to me..
take care!

thats great...keep up the great work...~sherrie~

Hi Kia
I saw you forum post and thought I would offer you some feedback. Firstly its a great poem, it lacks originality even in the title I thought... I've heard this before.
But your still young hun and theres plenty of time to continue improving - after all sometimess we experience similar situations and therefore about similar things so not all our poems can be completely unique even a few of my own! But you seem willing to improve which is great, even though your current stuff is a pleasure to read...keep writing and keep up the great work Eirisa xoxo

very well written write, it flowed very good. i can somewhat relate to this poem, and thanks so much for your comment. do you think you could read Daddy, Please Stop? It would mean alot to me, thanks! (your poem was beautiful.)

I don't like the theme, but that doesn't mean I don't know it's great writing-5/5

Very well done so many sad poems on this site! Good job!

I have to give u a 5

5/5 babe youre so talented!! Follow your heart and dont give up on your dreams, cos you have the potential to go so far..all my love god bless megzzyxxx

Its a over used topic but i enjoed reading this well done:)

your flow was good start til end :)

x)