wow a great poem i can kinda relate to. i have written quite a lot of poems with simalar themes to you. please read them and comment if u have time!
keep up the great work.

I most definitely relate to this, and you did a spectacular job with it. Nicely detailed and lovely flow...just amazing work with this poem. I love it. It holds so much truth.

xxx

I love this poem.I can relate to it.amazing job.Keep writin

*~JAMIE~*