this is a really good poem...it made me feel ya...keep up the work...~sherrie~

your an excellent poet..KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! Your truly good. This poem was really deep. I like that aspect of it..Please comment some of my poems as well.

Dawn

great poem! i love it! i can relate so easily! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

OMG!! that was really good!! that was hott!! loved it all the way!! keep it up!! :)

Hmm! Soul in pian here... Keep your gead up!

Great choice of words though!

Le Marquis