you write some of d best poems hun, great!!

lil ol me -x-x-x-

lol i read tih withoutlookin at the author and ny the time i got to the end knew it was yors hahahah great job hunnie, as always i love you!

Another kinky poem!!So so so good though!! How come all of your kinky poems make me horny? lol! brill poem hun xxxx

Wow, i mean honestly...you described damn near the exact thing that happens to me wit my man who sadly shares a long distance relationship with me! God hes gonna read this one, i know hed love it, jus wish i woulda wrote it - lol...lotta love, peace - Erika

I'm sorry but i really dont appreciate the comment saying that it's too long seeing as i said before the poem and i quote, "I know this is really long but i couldn't help it. Thanks if you do read it." it really wasn't helpful and has really annoyed me. so lil broken thing i really didnt appreciate that at all. its the first comment i can honestly say that about.

ellie (the author)

this poem is efing awesome! keep it up girl. xoxo kellie

Omg that was HOT HOT HOT!!! :) well done! sertainly turned me on!

that was really good poem. well done i liked it alot its really good keep up the good work.

hey! damn bo this poem was hot. i really liked it. your really good. i have one its called my idea of a wonderful night maybe you could read it and tell me what you think. my friend said its a great choice of words and it was great. keep it up.
~Kay~

dang girl thats a really good poem!! lol i didnt even realize how long it was. wow ur good at that i cant write like that 4 shit! lol thats y u do! keep up ur good ass writing!! and its not gross either its actually kinda sensual/beautiful sorta thing. good job

its an unbelievable poem..great one lil one..lol!!

another great poem elle, as always! bloomin marvellous! n li u r a craaaaaaaaaaazy lil moose! virginious?! lol mental!
Rach
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That poem is awesome. That excatly how it felt with my ex boyfriend. I didn't trust anyguy after i was raped ,but when you have the guy you want then you know it's fine and thats how it felt. Great peom! -Ericka

Not bad, I've seen better.

dont show him the poem...he'll dump you and call you creep

that's good writing.. real cute.. great job

sounds good....lol....I was wondering is thisa true or is it a subject of some kinda sort>?!?!?!?! lol w/b

i havent done what it says in it (still a virgin) but i have dreamt it! ;) lol

hot suff, damn.

lol tanx