this was a hott poem! nicely written keep it up! take care. :)

great wrk

HOT poem! You did a great job describing. My favorite stanza was:

"You take me in your arms,
And I hold on to you tight,
I have this dream over,
Night after Night."

It was a great ending to a great, hot poem! And the long thing... At first i didn't want to read, because I saw how long it was... Lol, but then I decided, Hey I have the time... and I am glad I did, because this poem is AMAZING! Great job!

~BJ~

Turned me on, good stuff..

This is such a great poem i loved it.. i loved your ending it just made the poem more dramatic and interesting to read... keep it up 10/10
xox CrAzY xox

Omg. could i possibly get any hornier? i deff need someone here with me.

This is a awesome poem i loved it 10/10

Nice poem i really enjoyed it 5/5

Very good, i like it alot
keep it up!! =]
ShOrTiE

Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

Wow! That's all I have to say.

Very talented writer.keep it up

Love it!!!

SO like when i saw this poem i didn;t want to read it because its so long and i am very tired but once i started i couldn't stop i read every d a m n line and i am very shocked about the ending it was only a dream =(

And now i just really miss my boyfriend Lol GReat poem i loved it!

That was a very good poem...I really liked it a lot..Don't ever stop writing ...your so good at it..Keep up the good work.

WOW... do you have ne more like this one

Omg that was really intense ...i ahd goose bumps lol...brilliant...keep it up!!!!!!!

DAMN! That's all I gotta say HAHA! :P

NICE POEM!..

I read it all... I don't normally do that but this kept me gripped and i just had to read some more. well written I had a kinda goosebumps sorta feeling to, well done!