Comments : The Knife

  • 16 years ago

    by Victoria

    Very descriptive poem you are a very good writer!

  • 16 years ago

    by pinkalias

    I just completly admire your graphic symbols. They were dark, grotesque, violent, disturbing-thus adding the desired effect of a horrific symbolized atmosphere to the piece.
    ex;"Torn and shredded clothes;
    Covered with oozing, scarlet liquid
    Look further; peeled skin
    A carcass once appearing solid
    Now a flooding display."
    I loved that stance, it was terribly powerful with a sense of words added to the main symbol that turned a cliche symbol into an originally written image of horror.
    Beautifully dark, excellent job

  • 16 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    An excellent poem.. most definitely worth more then a 5. Thank you for the comment. :) Take care and keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    I can't put it any better than pinkalias did. Very colourful discriptions - you have a talent

  • 16 years ago

    by creasy

    great poem!! loved the way it flowed..you have such talent...keep up your great work!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    oh wow that was simply.. amazing! the words were mesmorizing! it was amazing hun! keep up the good work!
    stay strong
    check out some of my work if you'd like

  • 16 years ago

    by D..

    That was simply amazing, you have such talent, you are going on my favs list right away, i can see where you are coming from with the comments you gave me thanks :-)
    Doreen 5/5 if i could have given more i certanly would have..brilliant

  • 16 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    OoO I like it. Nice write. >3jess

  • 16 years ago

    by Tessa

    This one was interesting, I liked it a lot. with all the detail you put into, it really gave a good mental description. ^_^ keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sean

    I liked this poem alot, and i cannot as hard as i try find criticism, only praise.

    The only thing i can possibly mention is that it's very vauge as to why that person is like that, though it also allows it to the imagination to try to work out why etc.

    You have amazing grammar use which encourages good flow throughout the poem despite tricky words such as 'monstrosity'

    You, are simply a good writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marissa Methanphetamine

    it scared me a lil' bit..... good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Marissa Methanphetamine

    it scared me a lil' bit..... good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    This is so amazing thsi poem literally blows my mind. you are sooooo talented beyond words....wish i wrote like you. keep up this God given talent...this is sooooooo awesome, beautifully wriiten and i love the way it flows and the way it builds! xxLISSA

  • 15 years ago

    by sibyllene

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    i really liked your repetition of the phrase "look further." it's like you were forcing the reader to notice, and see how it really was. very cool. i also like the last stanza, with the knife being old fashioned