I just completly admire your graphic symbols. They were dark, grotesque, violent, disturbing-thus adding the desired effect of a horrific symbolized atmosphere to the piece.
ex;"Torn and shredded clothes;
Covered with oozing, scarlet liquid
Look further; peeled skin
A carcass once appearing solid
Now a flooding display."
I loved that stance, it was terribly powerful with a sense of words added to the main symbol that turned a cliche symbol into an originally written image of horror.
Beautifully dark, excellent job
That was simply amazing, you have such talent, you are going on my favs list right away, i can see where you are coming from with the comments you gave me thanks :-)
Doreen 5/5 if i could have given more i certanly would have..brilliant
This is so amazing thsi poem literally blows my mind. you are sooooo talented beyond words....wish i wrote like you. keep up this God given talent...this is sooooooo awesome, beautifully wriiten and i love the way it flows and the way it builds! xxLISSA
i really liked your repetition of the phrase "look further." it's like you were forcing the reader to notice, and see how it really was. very cool. i also like the last stanza, with the knife being old fashioned