Very powerful. The last line makes you reread the poem to give the poem a whole new meaning. Brilliant job.

Good poem...this poem has a very unique flow...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

WOW....incredible poem!! Excellent!! Keep it up!! Take care.....

An excellent poem! Sorry it took me so long to comment. :-\ Keep up the great work & take care!

God bless you! <3

great poem, the last line just gives the poem a whole new meaning, it was well written

wow, that was so amazing!! i liked how the whole poem and the end lines portrayed different things, i gotta reread this, i absolutely love it *5

God Bless
Love Heather

Excellent, very powerful poem.
Take care,
Rachelxx

great job man! I love ur work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!