I'll be sure to check that out! Thank you :)

And to hear you say that I know I was successful!

Oh, this was quite the interesting one... almost schizophrenic if not for the sheer darkness of the portrayal which layers on so many more nefarious possibilities....

Thank you Whitney.
And no that pic is just my avatar. My pen name is Bardess, so I thought it was appropriate ;)

You have impable writing skills. Your ability to capture the reader is so perfect. Its hard to blink when reading your poems, because I don't want to miss anything. The way you use tedious metaphors.
I really admired this line-
"My marrow felt the cold of which he scribed, his life and my transit, delirium unto an already clouded reality I become...conscious whilst he breeds in fear."
I love the way you used the word marrow, its so uncommon, and so different, but it fit so well. I also love the way you speak of reality as being "clouded" ... because that's what it is ... unclear, and hazy. And I love the pause between become and conscious. Its almost as if you, the writer, are hesitant in stating your state of mind.

Excellent work of ART.
-Unseen

Your words move me.

If I could have gained such admiration from as giften a poet as yourself, then I will soon need to weight my modesty. *Chuckles* j/k.

Thank you UE.

Today I have no need, Bird. You know what I would say.

This poem truly was great and It was a fantastic read !! keep it up !!!!
May =D

Truly magnificant, its very moving and incomparable to anythng i have ever read, you capture the heart like shakespear but it s written like the only thing you've ever had, such wonderful majestic strength. Keep writing!
luv kt

Wow, Very brilianty writen, 5/5!
Your writeing style is so uniqe, keep up the good work

Very nice write!keep up the good work!
god bless