short and sweet...... nice work! sure i can help u... even though i dont think im that good but yeah just get my email off my profile and email me sometime and swap poem tips or sumtin lol.... nice work u seem like a talented poet!

thanx for saying to me i am a talented poet!! me and my friend are going to be writers when we get older

well i may like long poems but yours is short enough to be a paragraph... but good poem anyways

ya it is but i been writen longer poems latley but i havent been on this site in a long time

Great poem .. its short and sweet ... great work! Keep writing
Jess xox <3