hey good poem! i really like your stuff so far i should really be doing hw though rite now lol but i manage thanks for your feed back on my poems it means alot to me!

~lil slam~ take care

Hey this is a great one!..Thanks so much for all the comments too

Chris

i feel u i kno how it feels, yea it sux. But this is a good poem.

Hey wonderful. That was such a sad poem. I really liked it. Truely touching but understandable cause i've never experienced it. I wish i could sometimes. Love you so much, bye...

WOW this is so astonishing. Very beautiful but sad though. Pls. Dont let that keep your focus low. Great things happen when you look above the failing now. Smile and move on Hun!! Great work!!

nice poem!! i know how you feel!! but keep ya head up!! :)

ohh gr8 peom i loved it hunzz but dont ever feel alone we r heree put ur head up and keep smilin dont be sad :d love ya hunz take caree