no no, i dont want him to get caught, hes my friend, he did it out of protection of his sister and other girls getting caught...err, i should of made it more clear but thanks for the comment.

other girls getting raped*

Very well done, i enjoyed it

hey awesome poem i love it so much, too bad it's true though but i think that a title that might b kinda cool for this poem would be something like "Your mind for the Cost of his life" i know it's kinda long but it an idea if you want one, hey thanks so much for commenting on those poems i wasn't sure if i should delete it or not but now i not but it's been a bad week for me so thanks for brighting upmy day!

~lil slam~ take care!

Wow ... omg thats horribl but so well written! wow...

well, the good thing i see out of it is that the guy was only protecting his sister, which is the right thing to do. but maybe killing was just the wrong thing, but that's just my opinion. other than that, loved it! great writing!

this is a good poem, very sad. Um a good title could be "Betrayl".

This is so beautifully written. I love your descriptive genius, you capture this well "Stabbed Him Infinite Times"
I think the tittle is ok. Great work there. keep it up hun

that peom was good...i would name it 5 years..thats what i would name it.

BAD BAD BAD...DONT LIKE IT
ITS A COPY..
I SEEN IT ON THE OTHER SITE
YUNGEN

Great write <3 loved it xxxx so sad...some kids are so evil..

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

bslocum21, you are so jealous cuz i was hating on your poetry, it is not a copy, i never plagerize and this is not even gonna make me upset b/c i understand why you are doin it...juss wanna let everyone know, it is not a copy!! unconditionally, i would never do that!! stupid girl, stupid jealous girl

God Bless All Of You
Love Heather

thats horrible. pretty well writen. peace. -Luke

Awww thats soo sad....i wish it wasnt a true story..then maybe it wouldnt be as sad...well great job and keep it up=)

*XOX Sw33ti3*

that's really sad... eventhough he's ur friend and it was out of protection for the other girls...yeah his conscience will haunt him forever... but great writin=) keep it up ! thanx a lot for commenting. xXx

:( that is so sad!!!! I dont think that the guys should have killed anyone though, but I like how he protected his sister, but killing seems so extreme! im gunno stop ramling

it was a good poem but you need some more work done on it i gave it a rating of 4 i think you need to fix your wording a little but but other that that it is great

THIS IS AN AMAZING POEM HEATHER! I SERIOUSLY LOVE IT! it's so sad and I love it! but amazing at the same time! don't worry about my poem it was just a story! but please keep writing!

Love always and forever, Taylor

this is true i dont believe it man its so0o sad! but it was good maybe this would be a good title "A heart full of guilt" well check out my poem n tell me if u like tht title

I like this poem alot, it has a strong feeling to it. I cant say i can relate to it but its a good'n! Keep it up. your a great writer