i liked it and i can understand it well

it short, yet beautiful. i absolutely love it! great work.
Fighter
-xXx-

great poem i can relate loved it check some of mine out if u get the chance jessxxx

i really liked it untill the last line "die in the sand" i dont get it? is it sandy where you live? or is it a medaphore for war?

undelievanle...i can hardly believe as similar this is to how i feel. how its not worth living through the excruciting pain for the rare glimspses of happiness? well...thats the message i got from this poem...anyway, gr8 poem 5/5

AWW! That's sad, Jakey! I really loved it, though. It really makes me wanna write a counterexample poem, but I won't! lol!
PV

Awe what a sad poem =*(

Very well done, I loved it!

Lotsaaaaaaa love
-xxx-

Wow... very powerful jacob... awesome first poem!!! *hugs*

Amazing. truly.