lol too many big words for me in there, but besides that, the poem was great! keep writing!
-shannon-

I agree, you're brilliant, and a little sad. But, as Noah Tyler once said in a movie, "genius and happiness go about as well together as cheese and chalk." I can't get over how old you are. I was writing bad x-men marysues when I was 16.

Well I think that true genius' see too many of the reality's of life and the world to ever be truly happy. "Intellect keeps us in this lonely game"

Wow. Utter brilliance. Awesome vocabulary, you kept my attention the whole time. I loved it. Keep writing!

Wow. Utter brilliance. Awesome vocabulary, you kept my attention the whole time. I loved it. Keep writing!

speachless

lol, yes, unfortunately I am stuck at 16 for another year.

This is an incredible poem, Kaitlin. Unfortunately strikes too close to home, but that only adds to its impact. Quite excellent.

Beautiful poem. Very expressive. I think a lot of people can connect with this poem because it hits all the weak spots of human nature. Very well written, as all of your poems happen to be. You should be proud of your talent to express, write, and rhyme so beautifully.