Wonderful poem!

you know a lot of vocab thats great it makes it sound intelligent like some people could say something stupid because they dont know the right wording but someone else could say the exact same thing with better words and vocab and everyone will beleive them. so awsome loved it

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That line is great, thank you Mr. Bob Shank.

it was a good poem. and u used sum big words ;) keep on writing!!
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

a close look at reality

i love this poem, u have so much talent, keep it up xxxxx

i like your poems- you have a lot to say, are not afraid to say it and say it well.
Added you to my favourites
gemmax