great poem! i love it! really beautifully written and the flow is so perfect! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

awesome poem!!

awesome poem!! i love the second and fourth stanzas especially, great word choice & 5/5

Wow. I love this poem. I could never write like you! You know how to make a poem flow nicely.
Thanks for the comment! 5/5

-Juggalette

very deep...i love it!

dark, desolate and descriptive of a place ive brought myself to, meaning i easily and unwillingly relate. incredible sense of imagery, the picture perfect words determine the progression through it, the timeline expressed is an awesome splendor of magnificance, never quite seen ANYTHING much like the portrayel of depression found in this poetic piece of literary magic. congratulations on a job well done.
really really good, which is a total understatement

5 stars! ***** Thnx 4 commenting on my work 2!