This poem was inspired by a very strange dream I had. The previous day my friend broke his tooth. I tried to scribble as much information as I could remember. I hope you enjoy it!!

I really like it! its VERY chilling and I luv how u base it off ur dream!

Hi Hayley, i have several thoughts wavering throu my mind about this poem, at first i had the feeling it was a sexual expression, then readig farther i thought maybe it was a vampire type thing, and last but not least i thought it was about someone you knew and feared, so I have not rated it yet, i want to read thru it a few more times before I do, so I can give it the right rating, but so far I am leaning toward the high side. I will rate it sometime tomorrow, you write in a style that is your own design, and that is great, means your not a robot, but you give your poems some thought, so you deserve extra points fort that for sure. as ever Harry

Thanks Harry, you really ate and digested my words. In one of your three thoughts you were correct...But I will not tell you and spoil all, it is afterall how you percieve it. When I write I always have a secret message or meaning that is special to me. Poerty like art is left up to the person's imagination, making of it what they will.

Many Kisses
Hayley

what does this poem have anything to do with a Tooth Fairy? i was kinda confused on tht, but it was a great poem, i gave ya a 5
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â–‘Christinaâ–‘

Hey Christina

Good point what does my poem have anything to with a tooth fairy...It was a play on words with a hidden meaning. At the top of the comments section I did actually write that I'd had a very strange dream, this was my whole ingredients to the poem. That day before my dream my friend broke his tooth and this somehow got incoporated into my dream giving me the inspiration to write it.

Thank you for your comment!!
Kind regards
Hayley

It still doesn't really explain why, but its the best explanation I can give...

beuatiful!!! so well written so creepy so creative wow wow i loved it 5/5 awsum!

great poem! really creative! everyword was perfect! i love it! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

and yes every poem i write is from my heart and is the truth. . .sadly. . .

Excellent rendition-the picture in my
mind was scary-

WOW. Very impressive poem, great diction, rythm and flow and very chilling. xmollyxx

Different but creative. Enjoyed. lol

captivating poem profoundly revealing