I tried a new style of writing too! We're like trying new things sisters!!!!!!! lol Anyway, about the poem, I like it. It's not as good as your last one though...
Your faithful twitcher,
Zoe
P.s. I'M AWESOME!

its great, but you have nothing to be jealous of, oh, and by the way, LOOK OUT BEHIND YOU. just though you would like to know

i like the style. great poem! always good to try something new.

I liked it and I like the style, I like the way you describe your emotions xxx