My god you are an amazing poet. So glad i checked out your profile, that was excellantly written, i have no critisisms whatsoever. it was perfect, i loved the style, the wording, the meaning, everything. welldone, 5/5 for definate.

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o btw, you profile .... u might wanna just edit something you wrote: and I have proof of it, so I would suggest taking any of my work.

did you mean so i wouN'T suggest taking any of my work ... unless you were i dunno, but yeah. take care hun, please keep writing ... i will be back!

beautiful jsut move i saw the hwole thing i felt the wholething it jsut blew me away!!! that was amazing o my god im speachless your so unbeleivably talented gorgeous rhyme and everything wow jsut wow 5/5

Thanks guys, that means alot :)

That was awesome... it was so inbelievably powerful.
Aaron

Wow. Awesome job, burning isn't a very well-known form of SI but it does occur sometimes, Awesome poem keep it up!

wow...i really really like this poem...keep writing,i gave you a 5.

very good, i love the symbolism

That's a really great poem, there's such strong emotion shown, and it was very creative with how the message was represented. Nice work! If you have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx.

I still am answering them, Matt

Wow, this is a brilliant poem of yours. So powerful to me it was. Okay..I am at a loss for words. Well...uhmm...Beautiful work!

that was....WOW!! really good!! ..like all your work.. keep it up!! :)

Thanks Bob :) That means alot to me.

Makes we wonder what inspired this poem, be it physical, emotional or metaphorical.

A truly great read.

wow, im so speechless, that was an amzing poem, truly amazing, u hav so much talent,i wish i had even an centimetre of ur talent! Keep it up and if u cud cud u read some of mine and tell me wat you think? thanks.
keep up the amazing work xxxxx

awesome 5/5