whoever gave this a 2 is retarded. i liked it :D

on the first line, it should be "petal," not pedal. Besides that, I really liked it. Reminds me of the good ol' days eh? Something about the last line seems a bit off, but yeh, good poem.

beautiful poem! i love it! your words are amazing in the last stanza!

Wowzers, i like it. Hmmm... especially the last stanza. That is, if you're not a lvl 10 fighter :-P

Aken Sol