That's pretty good, interesting piece----xxxxx

that is an awsome poemm keep it up. the mood. good write.

Excellent job! :) I really liked this poem a lot. Keep it up and take care!

God bless you!

This was greate hon

I really like this poem. It has some great imagery, and you capture the moon very well. I'm sure you've already heard this, but you're a great writer. Take care and God bless.

Very good poem.. you write long poems. good imagery.5/5

Nicely said 5/5

This piece is also nice but there is room for improvement like reducing the syllabic coun to improve the flow. I liked your descriptions and the topic of the poem really reflects in this poem. I gave you 5/5 for your beautiful wordings and lexical power.

Tc

Wow. That was great.

I really loved how you talked about the moon, and the history, sort of, of it. You mentioned everything from legends relating to the moon (the wolf man) to us landing on the moon. It was amazing! I really loved the imagery of it all, and the way you talked about the secrets of the moon. You're an awesome writer, keep it up!

-mo-