Comments : As I Take My Life

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    That was really good. I loved it. I hope you dont feel this way though and Im sorry if you do. I think it deserves a definate five. Keep up the good work!
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Jenn

    Hey, wow I really liked this poem, it was so deep and I can relate with well, keep writing, also i hope that if you feel this way, one day you wont...:)

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    i thought that was a great poem!! it was strong!! keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by CritiX

    Yes, well it's really sad that in my darkest hours I write the best poems... it's sad that there all true

  • 19 years ago

    by CritiX

    Thanks for that =) Expressing myself helps alot.. but not always. Although I already have a lot of scars, and I see them everyday when I shower. I dont regret making any of em. I know it's hard, but so is life. I'm just glad I got the chance to write these poems before I get hit by a car someday

  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsey

    WOW!!!! I loved this poem...This is one of the most uniquely written poems I have read!! I loved the way it flowed and the choice of words you chose..This poem is amazing and it deserves so much more then a five!!
    Kind Regards,
    ~Chelsey~

  • 19 years ago

    by CritiX

    Thanks a lot Chelsey !! That means a lot to me

  • 19 years ago

    by CritiX

    Thanks a lot Chelsey !! That means a lot to me

  • 18 years ago

    by CritiX

    Thanks all for at least reading my poems and in some cases thanks for commenting..

    This is and will be my last poem here on Poems-and-Quotes. In a few days from now I will kill myself leaving this pathetic world.. Thanks for those that stood by me.. Cya in another lifetime maybe