BabyGurl in your comment to me
you said “you sound like your so
in love” well from what I just read
it sounds like we are both in love. LOL ( ;
Don’t it feel so good. Excellent write 5/5

yeah it does but you get to see your gurl i cant see mi man ! hes 19 thanks for your comment i!

NICE POEM!! KEEP IT UP!!

dats hell sweet i wish it was a fairytale 4 me 2 thoul lol good work thou lol

hi there gr8 poem,answer to ur question u left for me is,no me or whitney have never met in person,im from u.k.no buses go that far,we just read nd comment,and now make poems for each other,lol,keep writting

hey good job i feel the same way wid mah man keep it up=)

Thanks for the comment! I read a few of your poems, your are really good too!

this was good i LOVE the first stanza! xxxxx

Nice poem, wish i had someone i could write about, oh well:) Goodluck hope this one works out!

Awww this is beautiful! I love it and can easily relate! I love this poem it was very adorable nicely done!