really sad poem, made me cry, im sorry 4 your loss.
luv han xx

great poem. made me think. i like it.
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This brought me a tear - so sad and tragic especially when I read that your friend had a son - it broke my heart!
I hope everything works out for you!

hey again all i have to say is wow you really put ur poems into deep expression your so good at writing i can feel the emotion how this comes str8 from the heart since this is your real experience and i just hope you live on though uve had it rough ive been there 2 i know it aint easy, far from it. but keep your head up and take good care of her son for her she lives on in both of you, keep rollin soldier. your friend, traj

amazing poem. and i linked it back to ur other one... i get it... i get it... im so sorry...

great poem! ur awsome at poem writing..wow i even crying alil...as i said be4 ur great at poem writing keep it up!

tis a tear-jerker kalika and wonderfully written just like all of ur poems.

Kalika your poems are incredible just so sad!! Wow!! Great job!