I liked the bird must be pissed part.

The flow was off
but in only a few parts
the vocabulary
was amazing
great job with that
The message was
pretty good too
nice job!
5/5

The flow was a bit off, but again the excellent word chose covered it. The emtion was strong, the message was clear. although it is not one of personal favorites, well written and as always 5/5 Keep up the good work.

"I got upset one day and through a cup at the window pane,
just to have one chance to relieve this heart ache and pain."
Loved this part ^
The ending words were genius. haha
But sadly, the only part that caught my eye. 4/5, because I've seen WAY better from you m'dear.

:)

Hope the rating goes up cos I gave you 5/5. I like this kinda poems v much :). Love the way you have expressed and it could have been better if it was well-structured. keep in touch and keep it up :)

tc
Fsams

A very creative way of expressing the point.
The flow wasn't so good, but poems don't need it.
The depth was amazing, as was the emotion.
A lovely job with this one. :)

Good, job not your best but certainly still better than a lot on this site xxx alex xxx

Wow i was touched by your creativity in your writing... it was beautiful!! your should comment my poems.

You had a good ending.. but that last line was kinda long...you had good word choices but i thought the flow was a little off... but overall it was pretty good. 4/5