exelent poem, and very well written!!! i love the last bit, the ryhmes fit really well, and flows.
i hope that things get better for you, and your love will recognise your love, or that you shall indeed move on,
polly
xxxxx

Hey, this is a great poem, lots of emotion and you sound like a very loving person, I hope things work out and you find someone who loves you.
xxx

p.s. Just one thing, what does 'estrange' mean?

Hey!! Excellent writting! Flows so well and just fits together beautifuly! Well done! Keep on writting I can so tell you have lots of talent!
Shannon

beautiful poem very sweet and heartfelt i am going through a love poem faze at the moment so i absoltely loved this poem its so beautiful absolutely brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! your a talented poet!!!!! >>5/5<<
bec xXx

Good job, some rhymes seemed forced or didn;t rhyme at all, but others flowed very nicely. I really likes this stanza
"You may feel differently,
but I still fell the same.
I honestly love you.
To me it’s not just a little game."

its good i wish i could write poems like that~~!! how long did it take yu to write that?

Great job, loved it, another great poem Jena...awesome job!

OH wow! That was an excellently written poem!! It flowed so well and I enjoyed every line! You are a very talented writer and I hope you keep it up!

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great poem. i can relate to it.

Oh Girl, I can totally relate!!! this poem was really good, good luck with ur situation, I know it takes time...LiL One