mi mom read your poem and she admires how much your in love! and she really like you work

i hate how low this rating is, it disgusts me, a lot of these really young kids don't get such poems...eh yes, i'm young but i love stuff like this...i think it is beautiful bogie...i loved it so much*5...i have to add you to my faves jus to let you know! u r very talented and thank you for the comment but no, that poem was not based on any love, i just write about things from imagination but it does seem like you are in love so good luck!
Love Heather

BOGIE!!!!!!!!!
Well, I think this is the BESTEST poem i have read from you yep thats right i said bestest. lol YOU did an amazing job writing it...lol oh by the way thanks for the kind words in the forum....your a very sweet man with some KICK ASS poetry. Don't let anyone EVER tell you different. This was awsome. I love to read your poems because i read the first one you posted on here and its nice to see you grow as a writer i LOVE it...it's actually inspiring.
take care 5/5
with love,
scooby