I love it! keep on writing your writing is great! check out my poems if u get the time,
-Molly

I LIKED THIS POEM.. I GIVE YOU A 5!!

AWWWWWWWW what a sweet poem. I loved it you wrote it beautifully and the flow was absolutely perfect i wouldnt change one word in this poem because well, it wouldn't be the same poem..lol
take care and a 5 totally!
Miss. Scooby