i like the way this poem is written...its really cute good job =)

awww that was soooo cute mandy i love it

this is a very good poem. keep it up

very expressive poem

"She's over him, but her heart's still raw". I love that part. Good job. It says alot!!!!

Really great poem i can relate ti it, keep up the great work!!!

thanks for your comment...i loved this poem!

it unique but very very good. great job.

i like this one too. you have talent gurl.
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

hey thanx for commentin on my poems, i read sum of urs and they're really gud keep at it!

nice?..I'm always nice..*cough cough*

lol,n-e-w-z nice poem...for your first time writting it in that style it pretty good!!!!

Hey this is really good i've felt this a time before....please read and comment mine if you would like..
~chelsea~