It's a good poem, not your best, but good none-the-less... nice job!

ahhh very nice

hey i loved this poem it was cute its good that you could write it for you friends feelings
thanks for the comments
byez 5/5

IT'S REALLY A GOOD POEM.... I THINK YOU HAVE A DIFFERNT STYLE THAN ME... BUT IT'S OVER ALL A GREAT POEM...!