I felt the emotion in this poem! I truely loved it! Keep writing! :)

This was good as well

Aww such a great love poem! Brilliant words and thanks for all my comments. means the world to me :)

Good write 5/5

Your poem is very good. i love you writting style.

This is such a sweet poem. It's so full of affection and dedication for this woman. The rhyming was good and the emotion so heartfelt. A nice read. :]

Tammie

What a beautiful deidcation of love...I really liked this, I found it to be just simply beautiful.

The imagery you painted in this piece was breathtaking, it created very vivid pictures for me, and I thought that the similies you used gave a very powerful effect on the overall piece.

Just maybe try and break it into stanzas so that it is easier to read?

But apart from that, this was wonderful.

Another great title, great poem great all rounder reallyl iked the style of this poem nice xxx alex xxx

Kind of long but really well written, nice job xxx alex xxx