I liked it...you did a great job with it I didnt get it at first...but I'm just slow like that lol great job 5/5

Very nice.

All I can say is WOW

Short and completely awesome! You are what I like to call an vocabulary poet. Thats a good thing to me, lol. Great job with the word usage and even better job on the poem itself. It rocks! Keep up the awesome work! Take care!
-Conner

that really good!! great job!!

wow.......powerfully sad with a hint of anger, the perfect recipe for a suicide/depression poem, 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Great poem

Brilliant...loved the imagery! Nice flow as well! Keep it up~Holly